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Post by Taz on Sept 17, 2002 16:03:59 GMT -5
Having my moan!
I lay on my bed I try to relax
then try to move To adjust myself
the pain is bad It's making me sad
I can't get comfy i still can't sleep
Sometimes I just here And weep
It's late now All is qiuet
The darkness surrounds me It's all I have now
my mind is racing My body hurts
The world just stops My tears start to fall
When will it all end? How much time will I spend.. Just sitting here alone.. And having a moan!
Taz
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unicorn
Junior
lets be happy
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Post by unicorn on Sept 17, 2002 16:09:29 GMT -5
thats a lovely poem just on how I feel when I'm all alone
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Post by Taz on Sept 17, 2002 17:12:13 GMT -5
well thats what a lot of my poems are all about how I feel!! a good poet usues feeling taz xxxxxxxxx
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Post by OnlyMe on Sept 18, 2002 3:44:51 GMT -5
that is really gd taz! I can really relate to it hunny! You gone a bit poem crazy lately haven't you, lol! It's good, I always find writing a poem clears your mind and gets all those pooty feelings out! You can write happy poems too tho PML! love you hunny take carexxxxxxx
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Post by Funky-Fran on Sept 18, 2002 9:12:54 GMT -5
thats so good tazz
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Post by PurplySparkleyJoey on Sept 18, 2002 22:42:53 GMT -5
I think we need a comptition for a happy poem!!! ;D ;D The person who write the bestist poem about OMEGA wins a MARS BAR!!!! ;D
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