dont give up on me

[OnlyMe]

trapped inside 4 soft walls

walls that if you push, can bounce back

i cannot see through them

yet they are not painted black


They are warm to the touch

and pleasant to the eye

yet i hate them with a passion

as i stare blankley at the sky


blank as my expression often is

yet i understand all of what you say

My intelligence is not impaired

i hope to proove this some day


don't judge me on my twisted hands

or my saliva stained clothes

don't judge me on my vacant eyes

or my constant twitching nose


im gonna be someone someday

look within my eyes, can't u see?

i'm inside this vacant body

don't you dare give up on me!


hey! i wrote this when i was younger and very ill. my body is about as useful as a chocolate candle! but my mind is as powerful as any. i was so desperate for people to notice this and not sign me off as a helpless cause. It's very hard to show u r intelligent wen u cant communicate! i managed it eventually tho

[Taz]

you are relly good at this poetry stuff! I really wish i could put it all together that well please post more your great
taz xxxxxxxxxxxxx

[PurplySparkleyJoey]

thats powerfull stuff hun! But its about time some one said it!! It makes me soooo mad when people are rude to Fran ... and what we see much only be half of what you get. You just need a gain a leg mate ... that way you can kick em in the gooo... ;D/color]

[Funky-Fran]

lol, you seem to be a good poet

[OnlyMe]

thanx guys, means alot 2 me! ;D i love written poems!
take care mwah xxxxxxxxxxxx